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Class 5C presents its final projects inspired by this school year's programme "Fragmentation" on XXth and XXIst century art and literature.
Dear Simone,
ReplyDeletegreat music and very good choice of theme. However, I think you should shorten the first part of the video, expand the section on the "Hulme culture" by explaining what it consists of; furthermore, I suggest that you add some comments, either as an introductory text accompanying your video or as overlay texts (you can do that easily using Movie Maker). In your text, I would explain why you chose this topic and how you prepared your work.
Luisa